Jude at Travel Words has embarked on a year-long project to improve her photography through a series of personal challenges (#2020PhotoChallenge) and she’s invited us to join her. You can find out more here.
I think it’s a great project, and when I found myself critiquing images for this week’s challenge, I realised it’s definitely time I took part and offered some of my images for critique.
The challenge is ‘to photograph a subject using a background which is a pattern without distracting from the subject’ — and Jude acknowledges that it’s a difficult one.
The issue of distraction is central I think. Too much overwhelms the subject, too little runs the risk of not being seen as a pattern at all. And then there’s the question of what the pattern is formed by — and does it make sense in terms of the subject?
I think some of the most effective photos I’ve seen that incorporate patterns into the background are urban scenes –think brick walls, multi-stories with endless glass, graffitti. Trawling my archives failed to turn up anything even remotely appropriate.
So my background patterns are made of light — bokeh if you like. Do they work? Do they fit the brief? I’m not really sure.
And what about this one? Too tongue-in-cheek?
Do visit Jude’s challenge posts, and those of other bloggers who are taking part. We learn so much from each other’s comments.
For me, the knitting image is the most successful. It’s arresting, and immediately explains itself. I like the sparrows too. The patterns of the dappled light add to the mood and bring me straight to a summery glade. I’m slightly less sure about the flowers, particularly the first one. I find the granular pattern a little distracting, without its adding anything. The second one, although harder to read, has a gentle, misty quality that I’d be happy to see as a greetings card (that’s not intended as an insult by the way!).
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Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments Margaret. Odd that the knitting shot has attracted comment and it really was meant as a joke. 🙂
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Jokes are much needed these days!
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Agreed!
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So much magic Su 🙂
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Thanks Brian
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I agree with Margaret that the knitting one is the most powerful shot and I like sense of potential in the flat paper instructions in combination with the wool.
I once read that the eye goes to the lightest part of a picture – mine does, so I do find the agapanthus one distracting. The bird one works better for me as the effect is more even. Cropping the first one square would have put more emphasis on the plant, or (given a magic wand) if the gravel had been a bit darker.
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I forgot the mention when I saw the four squares together in the Reader, I was really drawn to the first one. The colours looked modern and fresh. It might be because the pattern is softened at that scale.
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Thanks for your thoughtful comments Susan. Interestingly, when I loaded the first shot I though it should be square too, but was in a hurry and just included it as it was.
I’m amazed the knitting shot has attracted comment. Maybe I was being too tongue in cheek including a knitting pattern?
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It’s not easy to predict what people will respond to. I often add a picture in as an afterthought, thinking “I’m not sure whether I really like this, but hey…” and find that’s the one people comment about.
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Same here.
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What a great project and challenge. I, of course, love your backgrounds and think they’re perfect!
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Thank you so much Amanda. I love how the online community creates these self-driven exercises and we all benefit.
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Me too.
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I love those three cute little birds. They look as if they liked posing for your photo, Su.
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I gave them just enough of my sandwich to keep them happy Peter.
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You should have saved the knitting pattern for next month’s textures Su! I think you are quite right when you say that this challenge needs a larger background pattern – have you seen Sue Judd’s contributions? She has a fabulous one with a dark patterned background and one figure as the subject which I think is a perfect example of this kind of photography. I like Bokeh, but this week the pattern should be one which is distinct rather than created. I thank you for your photos, and I love them all. Hopefully we’ll both find something more suitable now we know what we are looking for, but I agree that an urban setting is probably the place to find it.
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I’m really surprised at how many comments the knitting pattern shot has garnered, since I put it in there solely as a joke.
I agree about Sue’s shot. It was looking at her post that made me realise that urban landscapes offer some of the best shots for this kind of photography, although I also think that the pattern has to make sense in the context of the subject, and that’s tough too.
A really good challenge Jude — I was genuinely challenged, have learned new ideas and thought more about my photography. A win all round.
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Some testing ‘assignments’ ahead too, at least for me. I just hope I can get out to take new photos! It’s great that people are joining in to comment on the photos and really analyse them in the context of the task. I have already learned a lot 🙂
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Me too. It’s the community that’s making this work so well.
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Indeed. I’m looking forward to the textures.
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The back ground is so important in a composition. You don’t want it to take away from the focal point, you want it to enhance it. Nice work Su.
Leslie xoxo
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Thanks Leslie. Yes, it is a tough one. No distraction, but equally it has to make sense and add to the subject somehow.
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As usual I love all your photos but in the context of this challenge (and what an interesting one it is!) I’m particularly fond of your first one with the alpine flower – the pattern and especially the colour of the pebbles (?) are perfect to emphasize the flower!
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Thank you my friend. I really did struggle with the challenge (which I think is a really worthwhile one).
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I’m skipping the comments so I’m not influence by what other people have said. I find the first one the most distracting, even though I like it, because the background colors are so much the same as as the flower. I like the whimsy of the third one, but I think the one with the birds best fulfills what I thought the challenge was, at least as far as the pattern in the background not distracting from the rest of the photo. That being said, I guess the birds aren’t really a pattern. I like it anyway.
janet
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I just realized that I forgot about the header photo, which does have patterns in both places. So consider my “first” comment to be the first in the body of the post and go from there.
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😀
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Thanks Janet. It was an interesting exercise — a true challenge.
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Excellent photos!
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I loved all your photos as usual. I think my fave is the one with the birds – if bokeh fits the brief then you are a perfect fit for this challenge Su!
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Thank you so much Darren 💕
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